Here is my updated front cover based on my feedback.
Monday, 14 January 2013
Thursday, 10 January 2013
Tuesday, 8 January 2013
Peer feedback from Szymon Bukowksi.
I like the front cover mainly because of the picure. It is realting to the genre and follow convenctions. I also like that the rule of 3 colours are used but the the bright green is hard to read in some places (depending on the bacground). The process of creating the front cover is well orgonized and explained in detail. In future you might want to include convection elements like the date or the price. Overall I think The front cover is good mainly because of the picure and the leyout of the text.
I like the front cover mainly because of the picure. It is realting to the genre and follow convenctions. I also like that the rule of 3 colours are used but the the bright green is hard to read in some places (depending on the bacground). The process of creating the front cover is well orgonized and explained in detail. In future you might want to include convection elements like the date or the price. Overall I think The front cover is good mainly because of the picure and the leyout of the text.
Feedback
Luke Hallett
- Great work on the posts, very detailed with lots and lots of unique posts.
- Front cover is packed with good use of coventions, with a bold colour scheme.
- Maybe you could make the masthead bigger, just the word 'PULSE'.
Feedback
Laura Kohler
Overall assesment: Your blog looks really good, it is full of posts which are both interesting to look at and read! I like the way you have set out all your posts and you have wrote a lot about what you have done and explained it
Stregnth of front cover: Your front cover looks very professional! I like the colours you have used as they stand out to the audience. Your main image is very effective as she is looking directly at the reader which draws attention.
Development: You need a price and date on your cover to follow the typical conventions of a magazine cover. You could of also posted drafts using different colours to show how you come to deciding on your final colour scheme.
Overall assesment: Your blog looks really good, it is full of posts which are both interesting to look at and read! I like the way you have set out all your posts and you have wrote a lot about what you have done and explained it
Stregnth of front cover: Your front cover looks very professional! I like the colours you have used as they stand out to the audience. Your main image is very effective as she is looking directly at the reader which draws attention.
Development: You need a price and date on your cover to follow the typical conventions of a magazine cover. You could of also posted drafts using different colours to show how you come to deciding on your final colour scheme.
Peer Feedback
- Jack Galloway
- Overall assessment of blog - This blog is very good to read and look through, it has both images and text which makes it interesting to look through. Each piece of work has lots of information about each task you have done.
- Strengths of front cover - The colours used within your front cover, makes it easy to understand, all the writing is bold again helping making it understandable. You have used many conventions of a music magaizne such as: skyline, plug and plenty of pull quotes.
- Areas for development for front cover - Maybe try another colour that is different to your other drafts making it different.
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